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  dave93

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  Hi!
  Olyan feladatot kaptam, hogy van egy történet tő mondatokkal. Ezt ki kell "színesíteni" melléknevekkel, további mondatokkal, hogy izgalmasabb legyen a mese. Tehát például ez volt az első alapmondat: "There was once an empreror who lived in a palace" Ebből ezt csináltam: "There was one an old empreror who lived in an enormous, golden palace in the middle of the city Ping Chong"

  Megírtam a történetet, esetleges javítást kérnék, valószínűleg az igeidőkkel lesz néhány probléma. Ha esetleg mégjobban lehetne színesíteni akkor további gondolatokat is várnék. Előre is nagyon köszönöm

  There was one an old empreror who lived in an enormous, golden palace in the middle of the city Ping Chong. He had three beautiful daughters but unfortunately no sons. His only wish was that he wanted his daughters to marry before he die. He started to search for the best princes. After a long time he thought he had found the best three. On the next day the three daughters and the prices met. The gentleman were impresed by the beautiful girls, however the daughters didn't like them. They didn't know what to do. They knew that If they refused the marrige the emperor going to became very angry, but they didn't want to spend their whole life with a man who they don't like. So they made the dicission: They refused to mary the princes, and the empreror became very angry. He couldn't belive that. He said they must get married when they were sixteen years old.The girls was very upset. They made a plan, to getaway. When the empreror fall asleep they ran away. Couple of days later the girls found a work on a farm. Their job was really hard, working all day on the sun, but they didn't mind it. One day the farmer's sons came to visit their father. They were three handsome man. The girls really loved them and fell in love. They married the sons as soon as they were sixsteen. The empreror was very happy and his daughters lived happily ever after.

  

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